good points:
- The title of the magzine is relevent to the genre.
- All of the stories are ones that are relevent to the genre and you would expect to see in a college magzine.
- The background colour is not too harsh on the eye.
- It is missing a date for the magazine and a price.
- It is missing a selling line.
- The text is not in the same font making it looked mismatched.
- Add a date.
- Add a price.
- Change the fonts so they are the same for consitancy.

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